MARY SUE TEST Is you OC a Mary Sue? The test works for most of canons. If your answer to the following questions is "YES" add yourself the points.

I'm doing my own manga storyline XD So yeah...if you want me to add other characters...please look them up in my Obsidian Universe folders If you want their names, just ask! (i.e. ADD THE SILVER HAIRED B*TCH! XD) jk

1. Does your character have unnatural hair color? (dyed hair does not count) +2
Arisa: No (0)
Hanai: No (Her pink hair is dyed) (0)
Adara: No (0)
Hibiki: No (0)
Taylor: No (0)


2. Did your characters hair/eyes changed color over time on their own? +4
Arisa: No (0)
Hanai: No (0)
Adara: No (0)
Hibiki: No (0)
Taylor: No (0)

3. Does your character have any super/unnatural powers? +2 If it's a conon where many character have powers, are your character's stronger then most of the others'?
Arisa: No (0)
Hanai: No (0)
Adara: No (0)
Hibiki: No (0)
Taylor: No (0)


4. Does your character have two or more people romantically interested in them? +2
Arisa: No (0)
Hanai: No (0)
Adara: No (0)
Hibiki: No (0)
Taylor: No (0)


5. Does you character have love interests in two or more people? +1
Arisa: No (0) -- It's still being worked out, but she will have one love interest.
Hanai: No (0)
Adara: No (0)
Hibiki: No (0)
Taylor: No (0)

So far I'm good...I mean...other than the Goddesses having the odd colored hair, at least my main characters in the beginning are 'normal'. Haha...Ha...Ha...OTL

6. Your character's past is: a) Tragic, treumatic +3 b) Mysterious, unknown +4 c) Regular +0
Arisa: No (+2) -- I say half no/yes because she had a family, perhaps not a real one or loving, but it isn't technically tragic...
Hanai: No (0)
Adara: No (0)
Hibiki: No (0)
Taylor: No (0)



7. Was your character technically dead and then it managed to come back to life? +5
Arisa: No (2)
Hanai: No (0)
Adara: No (0)
Hibiki: No (0)
Taylor: No (0)

Just to throw this in (maybe as a spoiler):
Hideyo: Yes (+5) -- Ahahahaha...not her fault though. There's a reason for that.


8. Does your OC become the main character of the canon once it's there? +6

...What? Everyone in my manga gets to be a main character at some point...? *confused*

Arisa: No (2)
Hanai: No (0)
Adara: No (0)
Hibiki: No (0)
Taylor: No (0)


9. Can your character fight down the stronger enemies? +4
Arisa: No (2)
Hanai: No (0)
Adara: No (0)
Hibiki: No (0)
Taylor: No (0)

This is a messed up question...because you are expected to take down stronger enemies in their world. You're a freaking assassin, how do you not? I would say half for all of them, but I think that'd be a lie. Everyone has their weak days, and need help once in a while.



10. Does your character have it's own nemesis or somebody powerful after them? +4
Arisa: No (2) -- Maybe later on, but also not her fault entirely. I blame ancestors.
Hanai: No (0)
Adara: No (0)
Hibiki: No (0)
Taylor: No (0)


11. Did your character kill anyone? +1

Ummm....well it's their job...technically. Are we talkin for fun here? Then none of my characters have. I lied, a few have, but none listed.
Arisa: No (2)
Hanai: No (0)
Adara: No (0)
Hibiki: No (0)
Taylor: No (0)


12. Did your character saved somebody's life? +1

Arisa: No (2 + 1) -- ....More than anything I think this should be negative. Lol. She's lost a lot of people.
Hanai: No (0)
Adara: No (0)
Hibiki: No (0)
Taylor: No (0)


13. Does your character have unnatural features? (Like cat tail, animal ears, some claws or such) +1 point for every feature

Arisa: No (3)
Hanai: No (0)
Adara: No (0)
Hibiki: No (0)
Taylor: No (0)



14. Is your character a mix of races? (Vampire, mutant, werewolf, fairy etc.) +1 point for every race
Arisa: No (3 + 1) -- Its in her bloodline.
Hanai: No (0) -- ...I would say Hanai is part demon, only because of her personality. XD
Adara: No (0)
Hibiki: No (0)
Taylor: No (0)



15. Does two (or more) organizations fight to get your OC join them? +3
Arisa: No (4)
Hanai: No (0)
Adara: No (0)
Hibiki: No (0)
Taylor: No (0)





TOTAL:
0-10 You'd rather treavel to the moon and back again than create a Mary Sue on purpose
11-20 Your OC is an interesting character with no overdose
21-30 Your OC is acceptable, but maybe you could fix some things
31-40+ Too bad. You created a Mary Sue, face it.

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So Arisa is a 4...probably should add more tragedy XD Other than that...I mean, that's barely 1/3 of the characters in my manga. ASK AWAY! I'm going to start up tumblr to ask.

DOES ANYONE KNOW HOW TO MAKE THE TUMBLR POSTS FOR 'ASK ____' characters? oAo Cause I wanna answer questions in drawings!